Friday, May 4, 2018

My Finished Metaphor Poem

For the past week in Te Ngahere, we have been working on our best, elaborated copy of our metaphor poems. WALT  use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect. I mostly worked on finding words to make my poem more interesting and exciting to read. I really like my finished copy. I found it hard finding new and better words. I hope you like my new and improved metaphor poem.

Saff is...
Saff is a savage little lion cub, small and vicious
Saff is a playful kitten, pretty and pure
Saff is a marvellous pohutukawa tree, blooming with knowledge
Saff is a wonderful teacher, inspiring and helping others

Saff is a curious maltese puppy, fluffy and furious

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